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Belonging Part I by ~Octavarium245:iconOctavarium245:



She was such a gentle girl,
growing up only knowing paper and books,
but yet behind her innocent eyes,
lies the tears of years gone by.

She loved her brothers,
father and mother,
she disliked very little,
besides her solemn solitude.

Every night she prayed,
that a little light would come her way,
but she would only be answered,
by the tears that never left the darkness.

Then, finally it came to her,
a warmth never felt before,
and that day she packed
all of her belongings and said goodbye.

She tried moving into the city,
with cars and bikes buzzing by,
street lights frantically changing,
and buildings towering high.

She got a job,
but then was soon let go,
and she had no where else to be,
but she couldn't go home.

Once again her sleep was met with tear filled eyes.
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I really like this one. I dunno why, but it really makes me think and stuff lol. By the way... this is a song for my band, so please don't use it. I had it happen before =(

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~Anthrax-Smoothy:iconAnthrax-Smoothy: 5 days 22 hours ago Mood: Sympathy
This is sad, and very nice.

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:blackrose: An it harm none, do what ye will.
~Octavarium245:iconOctavarium245: 5 days 21 hours ago
Thank you =) It's going to be an epic song with five parts, two written by me, two written by the other lyriscist in the band I'm (sort of) in and the last part is going to be written by both of us.

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"Every breath leads me one closer to my last."
~Anthrax-Smoothy:iconAnthrax-Smoothy: 5 days 21 hours ago
Ooo, collaborative.

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:blackrose: An it harm none, do what ye will.